Making Grammar Work
An Advanced Study and Instruction Text
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SENTENCES
Unscramble the following words so that they make a
sentence.
progress military
because were many flying was over air the airplanes town show in annual the
Once you have figured out the sentence, carefully
consider how you arrived at your answer. To begin with, as you first read
through the words, what were you essentially looking for? Did you then look
for another particular element? What did you do with the remaining words?
Attempt to find specific answers to these questions before you read the
discussion that follows. Most people, as they begin to unscramble the words,
look through the words a first time to figure out what the sentence is about.
The most likely choices in this case are "progress,"
"air," "airplanes," "town," and
"show." In other words, people usually begin by instinctively
looking for the subject of the sentence, which names what the sentence is
about. Then they go back through the sentence to find out what happened or
what was being said about the subject. In this example, "were
flying" and "was" are possibilities. Thus, they are looking for
the verb of the sentence, which makes a statement about the subject. We
instinctively look for the subject and the verb in such sentences because the
subject and the verb are the essential elements in any sentence. In the
scrambled sentence, you may have matched "were flying" with the
possible subject "airplanes." Your next step was probably to put
together groups of words. You may have tried to figure out "over"
what and "in" what. This procedure also makes sense because most
sentences have such groups of words, called phrases. In the scrambled
sentence, you may have found two prepositional phrases: "over the
town" and "in progress." In this way, you may have been able to
figure out the following sentence:
Many military
airplanes were flying over the town because the annual air show was in
progress.
SUBORDINATE
CLAUSES AS SUBJECTS AND OBJECTS
A subordinate clause that names can be used as a
subject or an object in a sentence. Compare the function of the noun and of
the subordinate clause in each pair of examples.
Her loneliness
was apparent. [noun as subject]
That she was lonely was apparent. [subordinate clause as subject]
People noticed her
loneliness. [noun as direct object]
People noticed that she was lonely. [subordinate clause as direct
object]
She has forgotten
about the tragedy. [noun as object of the preposition about]
She has forgotten about what happened. [subordinate clause as object
of the preposition about]
These subordinate clauses that name are also called
noun clauses.
From
"Article Usage"
Either the definite or the indefinite article can be
used in many cases, with some difference in meaning.
She had a
chef's salad for lunch. [the emphasis is on a salad, not one of
something else]
She had the chef's salad for lunch. [the emphasis is on a particular
creation in some restaurant]
In many cases, either the definite or the indefinite
article is possible. The speaker's (or writer's) choice depends on whether he
or she has something particular in mind.
Nouns
formed from adjectives
In English, we express certain collective ideas with
nouns formed from adjectives or passive participles.
The deaf
can get help through government programs.
The unemployed often need to acquire desired work skills.
These terms, plural in form, indicate entire
categories of people. They generally classify people according to acquired
conditions. Some commonly used ones are the following:
the
rich
the poor
the unemployed
the jobless
the homeless |
the
handicapped
the deaf
the blind
the talented
the gifted |
As we have seen, the in English is related to the
demonstrative idea of that and those. In this way, we use the
with these terms because they are really shortened forms of those who are
rich (and so forth), an idea involving more or less all of the people in
the category.
Could
In the negative, could expresses either
possibility or capability in the past.
The secretary could
not type the report until it was ready. [possibility]
The doctor could not see him until Tuesday at 3 o'clock.
[possibility]
He could not
drive until he got help from his older sister. [capability]
Jack could not play his older brother's clarinet. [capability]
These ideas can also be expressed as follows:
It was not
possible for the secretary to type the report until it was ready.
It was not possible for the doctor to see him until Tuesday at 3 o'clock.
He was not capable
of driving until he got help from his older sister.
Jack was not capable of playing his older brother's clarinet.
In the affirmative, could expresses
only past capability. We do not use could to show that somebody
actually did something through that capability.
She could
play tennis for several hours without getting tired when she was a teenager.
but
She was
able to (not could) win the community tennis tournament when she
was fifteen.
or
She managed
to win the community tennis tournament when she was fifteen.
or
She succeeded
in winning the community tennis tournament when she was fifteen.
Possessives
with gerunds
What is the direct object in the following sentence?
His parents did
not like him going there alone.
As the sentence is written, the direct object is
"him," and the word "going" is an active participle which
modifies "him."

The writer, however, probably does not want to say
that his parents did not like him. What the parents really did not like
was the son's going there alone. In other words, "going"
needs to be the direct object, and the sentence must be reworded so that the
logical meaning is expressed:
His parents did
not like his going there alone.
In the revised sentence, "going," a gerund,
is the direct object. The pronoun "him," naming in the
original version, has been changed to the possessive adjective
"his," which modifies "going":

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Understanding
Grammar
What words would you add in the following blanks?
Sam __________
computers for a living. He goes to his clients' offices and homes,
__________ he does a lot of driving in connection with his job. He enjoys
his job, however, because he __________ often learns something about
__________.
Do only certain types of words make sense in each
case?
You probably added "installs,"
"repairs," or "programs" in the first blank. In fact,
since no statement is being made about Sam, only a verb makes sense to
complete the sentence.
In the second blank, you are likely to have added a
word to connect the main clauses that precede and follow the missing
word. An appropriate choice is "so," showing the cause and effect
connection between the two clauses.
A good choice for the third blank is "very"
or "quite" or another word that answers the question how
often he learns something about computers. In other words, what makes sense is
something that modifies "often."
The last blank must be completed with the name of
something. Specifically, the missing word needs to answer the question about
what, that is, to name what he often learns something about. Among
the many possibilities are "people," "business," and
"technology."
Practice
with analyzing sentences
Compare the functions of the word leaf in the
following sentences:
Most readers leaf
through magazines.
A leaf fell onto the picnic table.
People dislike the noise that leaf blowers make.
In the first example, "leaf" is used to
make a statement about "readers"-it is a verb. In the second, the
word is naming something that grows on a tree. In the last one, it is
modifying "blowers"-it is an adjective. In other words, the function
of the word depends on how it is used in relation to other words.
We can analyze the preceding examples as follows.

GERUNDS,
PARTICIPLES, AND INFINITIVES
Are any of the words in boldface in the following
example verbs? What function does each one have?
Making food
items to give to friends takes time on the part of the person doing
the work.
All of the words in boldface come from verbs, but
they are not verbs in the example because they do not make statements.
"Making" is naming what the writer is talking about in the
sentence; in other words, it is the subject of the sentence. "To
give" is telling more about the food items, clarifying their purpose; it
is therefore modifying "items." "Doing" is adding
information to "person," telling which person; consequently, it is
also modifying.
These forms that are taken from verbs but are no
longer verbs themselves are called verbals. There are several kinds of verbals:
gerunds, participles, and infinitives.
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A count noun indicating no particular one
The singular form of any noun or pronoun
naming something we can count takes an article. If the is not
appropriate because no particular one has yet been identified, we use a
or an.
Her mother is an
architect. [we can count architects]
A horse is an animal. [we can count horses and animals]
She found a big one. [we can count whatever "one"
represents]
With statements involving possession, we usually use
the indefinite article because we are typically bringing up something rather
than referring to something already clear to the reader or listener.
He has a
house in the country.
They own a business.
She possesses an excellent vocabulary.
Compare
She has the
dictionary that the instructor recommended.
Since the indefinite articles, a and an,
are related to the idea of one, there is no indefinite article before a
noun representing something we cannot count. In other words, we do not put a
or an in front of a noncount noun.
Mike is taking history
and geography.
People require water to live.
Plastic is used in many products.
Jeff is overweight because he likes food so much.
Older people often have problems understanding technology.
Consistently with the principle of using the definite
article only for something in particular, we use the before a noncount
noun only if the noun is used in a specific situation or is
representing a particular quantity of something. Compare the noncount
nouns in the following examples with those in the preceding sentences.
Mike has learned a
great deal about the history and geography of Africa.
The water in many places must be boiled before it can be drunk.
The plastic used for those bottles can be recycled.
Everyone liked the food at the party.
Humans have the technology they need in order to travel in space.
THE PERFECT TENSES
Compare the following sentences. What period of time
is involved in each situation?
Yolanda is
wrapping gifts.
Yolanda has been wrapping gifts for an hour.
In which case do we know when she started wrapping
gifts?
The focus in the first example is on what
is in progress now. The period of time is only the present. There
is no attempt to indicate how long she has been wrapping gifts.
In the second sentence, however, the focus is on the
hour before now. In this case, the fact that she has been wrapping
gifts for an hour is more important than the fact that she is wrapping gifts
at the moment.
THE SUBJUNCTIVE
Notice that the terms present, past,
and past perfect subjunctive do not indicate present time, past time,
and time before another time in the past--the subjunctive does not indicate a
real situation oriented in time in such a way.
- The present subjunctive expresses something that
may actually be realized in the future.
- The past subjunctive shows an unreal or improbable
action or situation in the present or the future.
- The past perfect subjunctive makes a supposition
regarding the past.
Note the comments on individual examples in the
following subsections.
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THE CONCEPT OF THE PERFECT TENSES
In English, as we have seen, we have a separate set
of verb tenses that we use when we want to focus on the period of time before
the present, the past, or the future.
We use these tenses frequently to express how much
time an action or situation has been in effect.
Alice has been
taking the class for three weeks.
Lisa has been teaching for seven years.
The guests have been here for half an hour.
The perfect tenses can also be used to indicate when
an action or situation started.
Frances has been
growing herbs since 1995.
Lois has been using the Internet since last year.
The Smiths have enjoyed making couscous since they visited Egypt two
years ago.
We can express with the perfect tenses how many times
something has happened so far.
Chris has
presented at conferences at least ten times.
The class has visited the science museum several times.
The town theater company has performed three plays so far this
season.
We can state, using one of the perfect tenses, that
something actually has or has not happened.
Mike has been in
San Francisco, but he has never visited Los Angeles.
The directors have canceled the project.
Their children have never flown in an airplane.
We have studied the present tense, the past
tense, and the future tense. There is a perfect tense that focuses
on time before each one.
The professor has
graded all the papers. [time before the present]
The professor had graded all the papers before she went to class.
[time before a past time-when she went to class]
The professor will have graded all the papers before she goes to
class. [time before a future time-when she goes to class]
The past subjunctive
The past subjunctive has the same form as the
past tense for all verbs except be, whose form is were. This
form is highly confusing to both native and nonnative speakers, who mistakenly
associate it with the past tense.
This subjunctive form is also used in some sentences
involving conditions.
The past subjunctive can express the unreal
present or future.
UNREAL PRESENT
If Steve took
a computer class, he could get a better job. [he is not taking one, and the
writer is not saying that he took one at some time in the past]
If Mary were tall, she would not need a stool to reach the cupboard
above the stove. [not: was--she did not go from tall to short]
If only I knew
calculus! [I do not know it now and did not know it in the past]
If Mikey only liked salads! [Mikey did not lose his taste for them]
She wishes she were
rich. [she is sorry that she is not rich]
I wish I had more money. [I regret not having more money]
Joe talks as if he
repaired computers all the time! [he does not repair computers all
the time]
Mary acts as though she owned a mansion! [she has not owned one]
Brad, because he
goes to school and works, would manage more easily if he had his own
car. [he does not have one]
The teacher would appreciate it if the students always wrote legibly.
[they do not always write legibly]
His mother would
rather he did not surf. [he surfs]
Mary would rather her guests arrived on time when she invites them
for dinner. [they do not habitually arrive on time]
FUTURE
It is time that
their son became responsible. [he was not responsible before-the idea
expressed is that he should become responsible in the near future]
It is time that we told them. [we should tell them right away]
Mark would rather we came a half hour before the play starts. [a
future event]
The choice between active and passive forms depends
on the meaning the writer/speaker wishes to express. Compare the following
examples.
A nurse
accidentally gave the patient the wrong medicine. [attention is called to
the nurse's mistake]
The patient was accidentally given the wrong medicine. [attention is called
to the problem of the patient's receiving the wrong medicine]
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PARTS OF SPEECH
Words that make statements: verbs
Words that make statements, such as
"take," "recognize," and "live," are verbs.
What do the boldfaced words in the following
sentences have in common?
The park attracts
many visitors.
The park is large.
The park has several campgrounds.
In the first sentence, the writer is saying that the
park does something (it produces an effect). In the second, the writer
is telling us that the park is something. In the third, we are reading
that the park has something. In other words, something is being said
about the park in each of the three sentences. That is, the words
"attracts," "is," and "has" all make statements
about the park.
Thus, verbs have in common the function of making
a statement about a subject.
The so-called present participle, by itself,
does not indicate a present idea but rather an active one. Consider the
following examples and the alternative ways of expressing the same ideas.
Those children, running
down the stairs, are taking chances. [present]
Those children, who are running down the stairs, are taking chances.
[present]
Their neighbor, waiting
too long to sell her house, had to accept a low offer. [past]
Their neighbor, because she had waited too long to sell her house,
had to accept a low offer. [past]
Marie, traveling
through South America this coming summer, will have a wonderful opportunity
to practice her Spanish. [future]
Marie, when she travels through South America this coming summer,
will have a wonderful opportunity to practice her Spanish. [future]
Passive (past) participles
The so-called past participles are in reality
passive modifiers rather than words expressing past time.
Passive participles of regular verbs end in -ed.
Irregular verbs generally have irregular passive participles. Refer to column
3 in the table of irregular verbs in Appendix 2 for the forms of these
participles.

Passive participles can also be made negative.

These same ideas can be expressed with subordinate
clauses:
The pieces which
were played by the band included selections from three different
centuries.
Documents which were written by famous people are often on display in
museums.
The pyramids, which were built in ancient times, have a great deal of
interest for people today.
The books which were not sold at the garage sale were given to a
public library.
The Johnsons especially enjoyed the dish which was not chosen by
anyone else.
As we have seen, the so-called past participle,
by itself, does not indicate a past idea but rather a passive one. Consider
the following examples and the alternative ways of expressing the same ideas.
The Rossini
overture played at the concert next Saturday will be enjoyed by the
entire audience. [future]
That Rossini overture, played at so many concerts, is always enjoyed
by the entire audience. [present]
The Rossini overture played at the concert last Saturday was enjoyed
by the entire audience. [past]
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WORDS
WITH DIFFERENT SINGULAR AND PLURAL FORMS
Compare the following pairs of words with different
singular and plural forms.
many
suitcases
much baggage
few
limes
little fruit
fewer
assignments
less homework |
the
fewest chores
the least housework
a number
of devices
an amount of equipment |
Few/a
few and little/a little
Few has the meaning of not many, and little
gives the idea of not much. A few and a little have the
very different meaning of some--as opposed to not any at all.
Chris normally
eats few [not many] desserts, but she ate a few [some] of the
ones at the party.
Dan spends little [not much] time taking care of the yard because he
works overtime several days a week, but last weekend he spent a little
[some] time doing work in the yard.
Sometimes we emphasize this difference in meaning by
adding very to few or little (= almost no/none) or quite
to a few or a little (= more than just a few or a little):
Alice eats very
few snacks because she does not want to gain weight. [she eats almost no
snacks]
Dan took quite a few pictures on his trip to Toronto. [he took a lot
of pictures]
A
number of/the number of
A number of is plural, indicating the idea of several
or quite a few, whereas the number is singular, expressing the
total number.
A number of
people were injured during the earthquake, but the exact number
of them was not reported.
See collective nouns in "Special Noun
Forms" in Chapter 2.
Infinitives
and participles with verbs of perception
Compare
I saw Ted cross
the street.
I saw Ted crossing the street.
The first example gives the impression that Ted
reached the other side of the street, but the second does not: the active
participle "crossing" describes Ted as involved in an action in
progress.
Verbs that already typically indicate action in
progress may not have this clear distinction. In the following example, both
the idea of watching and that of rain come or coming down
indicate continuous action.
I watched the rain
come [or: coming] down.
Similarly, we can say
The children
listened to the park ranger tell [or: telling] animal stories.
With certain verbs, only the idea of something in
progress makes sense.
I vividly remember
my father working on his projects. [not: work]
They discovered their son climbing out the window at 11
o'clock. [not: climb]
In remembering, the writer is seeing the
father working; in other words, we need the form showing something in
progress: working. In the second example, climbing describes
what their son was doing at the moment they discovered him.
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One and
you
In conversation, you is frequently used to
mean either people in general or a certain category of people:
You have a
lot of papers to fill out when you buy a home. [people in general]
At Riverview College, you have to take an English class during your
first semester. [students]
In writing, you means the reader. It should
therefore be replaced with a word that can represent the appropriate person or
people.
People have
a lot of papers to fill out when they buy a home.
At Riverview College, students have to take an English class during
their first semester .
One can be used sparingly.
One needs a
passport to travel to most foreign countries.
However, one often sounds awkward, especially
if it is used more than once. In addition, if a possessive form is a necessary
part of the discussion, the options are either one's or his or her.
Also, the writer may need to repeat one or its alternatives, he or
she or him or her. A better strategy is to use a noun that
specifically names the category of people that are referred to. Instead of
writing
In high school, you
were able to choose some of your classes.
or
In high school, one
was able to choose some of one's classes.
write
In high school, students
were able to choose some of their classes.
Notice that we can correct [or improve]
When you
return [or one returns] from a trip, you usually have [or one
usually has] many articles to put away.
by writing
When people
[or travelers or tourists] return from a trip, they
usually have many articles to put away.
But the idea can also be effectively reworded as
follows:
Travelers
returning from a trip usually have many articles to put away.
As and
like
Like has not been consistently accepted as a
conjunction. It can easily be replaced by words that are considered correct.
He was driving on as
if he knew where he was going.
She talked as though she had forgotten all about our appointment.
AGREEMENT
ERRORS
As we have already seen, subjects, verbs, and any
pronouns and possessive adjectives referring to the subject, must agree--they
must be consistently singular or plural.
She likes
to prepare her meals by herself.
They like to prepare their meals by themselves.
Similarly, pronouns and their antecedents must agree
in number. The following sentence, therefore, does not make sense.
If a person
calls someone late at night, they [!] may disturb them
[!].
We can correct the sentence by using the plural
consistently or rewording the sentence.
If people call
other people late at night, they may disturb them. A person may disturb
someone by calling late at night.
People speaking do not always follow the principles
of agreement regarding pronouns and possessive adjectives because English does
not have certain singular forms to represent either the masculine or the
feminine. In writing, however, we need to be precise in order to communicate
effectively.
Nearly everybody
wants to have their own room to themselves.
[conversational]
Nearly everybody wants to have his or her own room to himself
or herself. [grammatically correct]
Usually we can avoid the awkward double forms--his
or her, etc.--by expressing the idea in the plural:
Nearly all people
want to have their own rooms to themselves.
See also the section "Other Indefinite
Pronouns" in Chapter 6 for rewording ideas.
Be
supposed to
Supposed, meaning expected or obligated,
is a passive modifier used with the appropriate form of the verb be. It
is followed by an infinitive.
The children were
supposed to clean up after the party. [expected to]
Doctors are supposed to help people with physical problems. [obligated
to]
Both nonnative and native writers frequently fail to
add the -d at the end of supposed.
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Use
to
Many ESL students do not realize that English has
only the past form of use to. They erroneously use this form in the
present tense to express a repeated action.
I use to
study my English in the evening. [instead of I study]
They should be reminded, first of all, that this form
occurs only in the past.
I used to
go to school at 8 o'clock when I was a child.
It should also be clarified to them that this form is
the equivalent of the simple past. In other words, the preceding example can
be worded as
I went to
school at 8 o'clock when I was a child.
The students can also be reminded that we often add
adverbs such as often, usually, or generally to emphasize
the frequency of the repeated action.
See also "Be and get with
adjectives and participles" in Chapter 8.
Used
to do/be used to doing
Most ESL students have difficulty distinguishing
between used to do and be used to doing. They may write or say
I am used to
eat my big meal in the middle of the day. [instead of am used to
eating]
It should be clarified to them that be used to
doing means be accustomed to doing. In other words, we use this
construction to express what is customary or normal for us to do. They should
also be reminded that this expression can be used in all verb tenses whereas used
to do, described in the preceding subsection, has meaning only in the past
tense.
See also "Be and get with
adjectives and participles" in Chapter 8.
Present
perfect in place of the past
ESL students may say or write
I have left
my house at 7:30 this morning. [instead of I left]
Most languages that have a verb tense that
corresponds in form to the English present perfect use the tense for recent
time that is finished. English, however, uses the past tense for time that is
finished, regardless of how recently the time ended. See the discussion of the
past tense in this chapter.
Missing
article
Nonnative speakers may omit articles in certain
positions, such as before a singular count noun, because different grammatical
or idiomatic usage in their own language interferes. They may, for example,
fail to add an article with a noun identifying a person by profession.
He became a
doctor even though his family wanted him to be a businessman. [these
articles, necessary in English, are omitted in some languages]
Students who understand that a singular count noun
requires an article in English can overcome this problem.
The indefinite article is not used with nouns in a
partitive sense because such nouns are noncount.
He has egg on his
face. [the meaning is some egg, not an egg]
They bought film for their camera. [some film, not a film]
Compare
They bought a
roll of film for their camera. [we can count rolls]
Extra article
USE OF THE DEFINITE ARTICLE BEFORE A NOUN IN A
GENERAL SENSE
The [!]
health is extremely important.
"The health" makes no sense in
English because the writer is not talking about any particular health.
He enjoys
listening to the [!] music.
"The" is inappropriate because the
writer is not talking about any particular music.
Article
errors in conjunction with pronouns and related forms
With other
Speakers of certain languages routinely omit articles
that need to be used with both the pronoun and the adjective forms of other.
I finished reading
one book, so I got other. [instead of another]
He has not bought other book. [instead of another or the
other book]
With
expressions of quantity
Nonnative students may write
Many of
students have problems with English.
The sentence should refer either to many students
(that is, no particular ones) or to many of the students (particular
ones, such as the ones at the writer's school).
This error is common with many, much, some,
most, numbers, and other expressions of quantity.
ESL students also omit of in similar
constructions.
A lot people
were there. [a lot of people]
A related problem is the failure to distinguish
between the pronoun and adjective forms of numbers.
I bought a
fifty-dollar dress. [the adjective dollar, not the noun dollars]
A six-foot woman stands out in a crowd. [the adjective foot, not the
noun feet]
Students should be reminded that these words are
adjectives and therefore are not given an -s or otherwise made plural.
Nonnatives commonly fail to distinguish between few
and a few and little and a little:
I have few
responsibilities at work. [instead of a few]
This distinction is explained in "Words with
Different Singular and Plural Forms" in this chapter.
Problems
with relative clauses
Adding
extra words
ESL students sometimes add a pronoun to indicate what
the relative pronoun replaces.
The books which we
borrowed them at the library were in Spanish. [them is
superfluous because which already replaces books as the object
of borrowed]
The explorer whom
the author wrote about him is famous in other countries as well. [whom
is the object of about, making him superfluous]
Confusion
between what and that in subordinate clauses
Nonnatives, especially those whose languages have the
same or similar words for what and that in subordinate clauses,
make mistakes in the use of the two words.
He did not
remember that [!] the instructor said. [what is needed as the
object of said]
See "Subordinate Clauses as Subjects and
Objects" in Chapter 1 and "Further uses of that" in
"Finer Points" in Chapter 1.
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